Rob
06-19-2008, 03:35 AM
Rod,
As per your request in the other post here I my thoughts:
1. The site is clean with no clutter
2. Navigation is clear
3. The 'me' factor comes out well i.e. personalised service is your strength
4. You are transparent on your pricing and your T & C which gives the client confidence
Areas to review:
1. I would remove the Paypal button; it doesn't give the right impression and serves no purpose at this stage of the buying/quote process
2. On your pricing page I would not state that you are willing to negotiate. You are immeidately sending the wrong signal and giving permission for clients to negotiate at the very beginning. You need to confident enough in the service you provide to stick to your pricing except for regular customers etc
3. Include a testimonials page. You are focusing on service as a key selling point so get comments from customers and put them up - provides the visitors with further about your ability to deliver
4. Not sure what your keyword or phrase focus is but I googled 'couriers in essex' but you didn't come up on the first page. Do the search for this phrase or your choosen phrase and see what description title comes up for the higher ranking sites - you'll see the emphasis on essex and related areas. Ok, ranking is not just down to description but it helps.
Hope that's useful.
As per your request in the other post here I my thoughts:
1. The site is clean with no clutter
2. Navigation is clear
3. The 'me' factor comes out well i.e. personalised service is your strength
4. You are transparent on your pricing and your T & C which gives the client confidence
Areas to review:
1. I would remove the Paypal button; it doesn't give the right impression and serves no purpose at this stage of the buying/quote process
2. On your pricing page I would not state that you are willing to negotiate. You are immeidately sending the wrong signal and giving permission for clients to negotiate at the very beginning. You need to confident enough in the service you provide to stick to your pricing except for regular customers etc
3. Include a testimonials page. You are focusing on service as a key selling point so get comments from customers and put them up - provides the visitors with further about your ability to deliver
4. Not sure what your keyword or phrase focus is but I googled 'couriers in essex' but you didn't come up on the first page. Do the search for this phrase or your choosen phrase and see what description title comes up for the higher ranking sites - you'll see the emphasis on essex and related areas. Ok, ranking is not just down to description but it helps.
Hope that's useful.